Tuesday 17 June 2014

Pablo


Mary filled with jealously as she watched that cow Debbie flirting with Pablo. She had been hogging his attention all the way through the lesson, hardly giving the others in the class a look in. Mary thought about how Debbie had changed over the weeks, for the first class she had come in a baggy T-shirt and jeans, but after meeting Pablo that all changed. The clothes got tighter, the cleavage deeper, the skirts shorter. God, she should look at herself in the mirror, forty if she was a day and dressing like a cheaper hooker. But Mary had to admit Pablo was worth it.

Mary watched him as he chatted to Debbie, he wasn’t really that good looking; she hadn’t even noticed him at first. Okay, he had a certain Mediterranean charm and the lovely olive skin of his ancestors but his real stand out feature was his voice; a husky burr that turned the women in the class to jelly. His voice could melt the meanest of hearts and Mary didn’t have a mean heart.

She closed her eyes and suddenly Pablo pounced, he caressed her neck and shoulders as he kissed her, his tanned hands slipped down her back expertly releasing her bra as they travelled. She shivered as her gently massaged and molested her. His eyes were burning with intense desire leaving her powerless to his charms. Pablo was totally in control, he made Mary’s body shake with lust and passion.

Suddenly Mary was aware of the rest of the class around her. The musty smell of classroom filled her nostrils and the bright lights hurt her eyes. She struggled for a minute to get her bearings but then she realised the whole class was looking at her. Debbie and Pablo were staring with their mouths open. Mary’s face, already burning red from her fantasy, blushed deeper as she realised she had gotten a bit carried away. She looked like a Ribena berry and felt like she was going to explode. The class were obviously expecting her to speak, but she couldn’t remember what they had been doing before her daydream had kicked in. She looked around her for some clues but couldn’t find any; finally she collected her thoughts enough to say something.
‘Okay class let’s take our break there, we’ll start this again when we get back. Ten minutes okay?’

7 comments:

  1. That's interesting what attracts us to other people: similarities or differences, familiarity or unfamiliarity, physical features or features of character, proximity or the fact that somebody is far away...? Pheromones? I still haven't figured out and I get surprised at myself again and again

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  2. I wonder how you would record this one. There should be female voice here. I like this story very much

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    1. Challenge accepted - it is not brilliant but it is quite amusing - I might try again soon

      http://garethsshortstoryblog.blogspot.co.uk/2013/04/the-phonecall.html

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  3. sorry I think i have written this comment under Pablo and that was supposed to be under the Phonecall - the one about female voice

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  4. Nice story and husky voice ;-)

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  5. Now, I can't remember what I've been doing:-)

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